tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546760186290746943.post7356747758194398824..comments2017-11-18T15:37:37.861-08:00Comments on Blank Page: Ethics in Computer Science HAJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12819580506281273934noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546760186290746943.post-7486811163498562782017-10-09T00:27:49.103-07:002017-10-09T00:27:49.103-07:00I forgot an a in between by and scholar. Inalso ne...I forgot an a in between by and scholar. Inalso needed quotation marks at the end of the revised sentence. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02597453342182581192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7546760186290746943.post-76970422092180758022017-10-09T00:22:15.245-07:002017-10-09T00:22:15.245-07:00Hello Ramon!I really enjoyed reading your blog bec...Hello Ramon!I really enjoyed reading your blog because I don't know much about computer science and realized there are expensive consequences in coding mistakes. I think your image was related to your topic and states what the blog would be about. One way you could fix your blog is to talk more about your position because you mentioned the field, but not state what your desired position would be. Also I think you could reread your blog to fix grammatical errors. You can clarify your blog by explaining how exactly have people died because of an unethical behavior in paragraph 3. I also think you can better your blog by stating more ethical responsibilities a computer scientist has other than coding mistakes. One way you could fix your first sentence in the last paragraph is by stating,"The Morris Worm is a program developed by scholar/computer scientist who studied at "Cornell University." This program failed miserably at trying to produce it. Hope this helps in your revision.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02597453342182581192noreply@blogger.com